Feedback from solo dance

Feedback from my solo dance.

The strengths that were illustrated is through showing and demonstrating good expression of what my dance is about and what it is suggesting towards the audience with the theme and stimulus of the music. Another strength that I have is the stop within my dance to portray stillness in my solo dance .One of the improvements that I need to work on is building up more energy and even more intensity with the movement with the help of the stimulus of the music(this can be demonstrated through using more of the dynamics in my movements and portraying them). Building more energy will require using more intensity in the dance by increasing the speed-faster and stronger. In contrast, to when I begin on the floor I use contrasting dynamics decreasing the speed to be slower and softer. I need to be really strong and confident when doing my solo dance. This will require me to be practicing my solo dance more full out. In order, to make sure on what I am doing is is strong. When I am doing my turns I have to make sure that there is sharpness in my head when doing the turns. I will be able to do this by making sure that my head is out of the way through tieing up my hair. This will help me with spotting with my turns. As, I lose balance when doing my turns and going into Demi point. For me to improve on this is through dancing my solo in bare feet and not with socks. Which would allow me to be more balanced in my turns and to be more strong within my dancing. This would allow me to be more strong in my performance and stage presence within the dance.